Below we provided top 10 easy to solve mistakes you should avoid when writing motivation letter for scholarship. Make sure to steer clear of them before submitting next motivation letter.
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Subject: Motivation letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
With this letter I wish hereby wish to apply and state my motivation for entrance to the Master program in Welfare Economics at the University of XXX for the 2014/15 academic year.
Name and Surname of the Sender
Jan 20, 2014
Ms. Jennifer Ilukena
The Bank of Scotlans
Dear Ms. Ilukena:
With this letter I hereby wish to apply for a Business Systems Analyst position at The Bank of Scotland as posted on the company website. With a goal to work for a global financial institution that supports its clients to manage their financial assets, I find your Bank the best place to work by utilizing my skills for your growth.
I have relevant work experience in the area of business analysis and therefore I believe to be suitable candidate for this position, since I possess all the necessary qualification to perform my duties in effective and efficient manner. As you may note in the enclosed resume, I have excellent results in managing resource allocation among different projects in order to maintain quality portfolio. In addition I have demonstrated capability to understand technological and business initiatives, and I am experienced in the managing of teams to ensure punctual completion of work, preserving expected workload of each team member. Furthermore I would like to point out that I am well acquainted with Business Objects, MS Office and other software.
By employing all my skills and competences, I supported company top management in the development and implementation of the project strategies. I have also experience in working with the most prominent business leaders, and have often being praised and rewarded.
Please find out more on my qualifications by reading enclosed resume. Thank you very much in advanced for your consideration. If you have any further questions regarding my candidateship, please contact me via telephone or e-mail.
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Name ad Surname of the recipient
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Subject: Letter of Motivation
Dear Madams, Sirs,
I found your job ad in the California Employment Weekly last Monday. Since, I am a freelance writer/editor of online content with experience in administration of various themed blogs; I strongly believe I am an extraordinary candidate for the job posting offered in your company.
As you may note in the attached resume I hold BA degree in English language and literature. As especially relevant to the post, I would like to stress my work experience with Universal Company, where I have been working as an Business Representative. My duties included writing of feature articles for the website, managing content and link submissions and preparation/ distribution of a weekly email newsletter to subscribers. In addition to previously mentioned post I have also worked with the European Policy Think Tank, where I conducted several research, drafted various reports and I was in charge for writing of press releases.
Besides reading the attached curriculum vitae, please have a look at my writing samples in the attachment and reference list.
My schedule typically allows for about 5 hours of freelance work per day. I would be delighted if that could be consumed with writing/editing online content for your company website.
Thank you for the consideration of my application.
28 October 2013
Milano Street, 55
James River Coal Company
901 East Byrd Street
Richmond, VA 23219-4529
Dear Sirs, Madams,
Re: Position in coal mining
With this letter I hereby wish to apply for the position of Coal Miner advertised on the JobsEurope website.
I have recently obtained a Certificate III in Underground Coal Mining Operations at TAFE and am eager to start my career in the mining industry, in particular with a leading company in the industry like James River Coal Company.
During past year, I have had experience working in the mining environment as a trainee with JimWalter Resources, Inc., a mining and foundations excavation company. Thanks to this experience I was trained to handle large machinery and equipment and drive medium rigid vehicles. During my engagement with this company I have also acquired my MR driver’s license.
Working at JimWalter Resources, Inc., has shown me directly the importance of teamwork in encouraging efficient and effective work, but also in enhancing the safety of each individual. I personally believe that strong teamwork skills I have gained there will help me to be a valuable addition to your enterprise.
As you may note in the enclosed resume, my employment history is closely related to mining – from working in kitchens and on building within mining sites. Bearing in mind this fact I have built awareness towards importance of safety and understanding of safety regulations and compliance. In 2008, I have obtained First Aid Certificate which I renew every year. Working in different environments has also given me a thorough understanding of different workplace safety practices and I aim to utilize this knowledge in every job.
I honestly believe that I am the most suitable candidate for this job placement, as you can see from my attached Resume.
Thank you very much in advanced for your consideration. If you have any further questions regarding my candidateship, please contact me via telephone or e-mail.
01465 – Dresden
December 7, 2013
Ms. Katia Schulz
Name Strasse nr 55
Dear Ms. Schulz:
I saw your advertisement on JobsEurope for the position of a Social Media Manager at Media GmbH. Taking into account my skills and experience in the field I would like to apply for this position. Since I have worked considerably on social media marketing and on numerous social media campaigns, I am confident that I possess the business intelligence necessary to perform on this job well.
I believe that a strongest recommendation for this post is my passion for internet and social media. Since I comprehend the business exceptionally and am familiar with all tools that govern it, I am convinced that I will have much to add to your company’s promotional activities. Having excellent knowledge of Facebook, Youtube, Twitter, Tumblr, Instagram and Google+, I possess great potential to effectively and efficiently create and manage promotional strategies that actually give results.
My resume is attached and there you can find detailed information in regard to my work experience, education and skills. I would highly appreciate to meet you in person and discuss this position in detail. In the interim, please feel free to call me at (000) 000-1234 if you need to contact me.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
63 Smith street
Mr. Jerald Hill,
News Magazine Daily
Dear Mr Hill
Re: Online newsmagazine Editor
I am using this opportunity to apply for the position of Online newsmagazine Editor at “News Magazine Daily”
As you may note in the attached resume I am writer specialized in online media. Currently I wok for one of the most innovative independent media projects of the USA in the past few years, where I have explored, written and edited on topics including national and international politics, the arts, pop-culture and sports.
As the Editor of News Magazine Daily, I was in charge of the team consisted of 36 reporters, editors, photographers and designers from around the country on a political blog that reached high visit rates in the recent years. Thank to this post I have also gained a skills in commissioning content and preparing written and visual content daily suitable for wide public.
My articles are being published in some of the top US and International web magazines, including: times.com, economist.com, ect. For detailed reference list have a look at my resume.
In a case you need some further info do not hesitate to ask. I look forward to meeting with you to discuss this exciting opportunity further.
ATTN: HR Department of Worldwide Travel Ltd.
Dear Sirs, Madams,
I am writing this letter to express my strong motivation for a tour operator position within your company. Since I hold degree in tourism and an experience in working for a major travel agency in Greece, I believe I have a substantial knowledge of the sector.
I would appreciate the opportunity to gain experience in a English speaking environment, and to get insight in the operations of a Tour Operator in England and furthermore to improve my English language skills.
My professional experience in a tour operator is in the following areas:
Telephone sales of travel packages
Sales of flight tickets
Conference tourism and organization of big corporate events
My ultimate goals are to learn how the business sells its product to its customers, how many services it offers for each product, what kind of hotels they work with, what the market target is, what the best strategy to decide a suitable price is, etc.
I would like to point out that I am not looking for a specific department in your company; however, the marketing and sales department would be the most interesting for me.
Thank you very much in advance for your help.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Most of the people perceive motivation letter a formality during application process. Therefore there are not investing strong efforts to write a personal statement that will ensure their placement for a job/scholarship. However, this often perceived “pure formality” called motivation letter can win you a job interview and future job placement. Below we provided you a list of key elements that have to be included in your letter of motivation, in order to write a good one:
- Do not forget to mention why you have decided for the concrete company to apply for a job. Be clear, concise and express your unbiased motivation.
- Try to reflect personal approach as much as possible. For example if you know the name of HR person, address the letter to this person.
- Do not mention your weak point in the letter, since they will be probably discussed during your job interview. However don’t be to much vainglorious since this will make wrong impression. Be realistic about yourself and try to point out your strong points.
- Your letter should reflect positive spirit and orientation on future. For example you can use following phrase: ”I am eager to improve my skills and fully prepared to adapt myself to the new working environment…”, instead of “I am not experienced in the relevant field.”
- Quote and describe concrete facts and situations to articulate your motivation for specific company/placement.
- Try to find out as much as possible about company before applying. This will show your interest about company and reflect you ability to prepare relevant information on your future post.
- Put only the most relevant facts and experiences in your motivation letter. Keep it brief and clear. However do not forget to tell something about you as a person.
- Mention your accomplishments in education or professional experience. It would be also useful to express you perspectives in career of in education., for example where do you see yourself in the upcoming period.
- Use a motivation letter as a tool to distinguish your application from other with sample qualifications.